怎么解决：写英语作文很痛苦 既不知道写啥 又不知道咋写的问题

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英语作文写起来痛苦，不知写啥、不知咋写。这源于英语写作方法出问题了。英语作文并不是只有得低分的模板英语写作法，还有很多事关内容、逻辑、思维及其表达形式的英语思维得高分的写作法，需要学生予以关注和注意学习。下面分别以㈠英语逻辑思维法写作英语和㈡模板英语和中文思维法写作英语方式，同时写作《关于抱怨购买洗衣机质量问题》话题的英语作文：

㈠英语逻辑思维法写作英语

Dear Mr.Johnson

I write you an e-mail expressing my dissatisfaction over the products quality about your washing-machine, which was bought in your shopping mall two weeks ago. The machine is found leaky after its use at three-day time.

Since your customers service center promises, by my having made phone call to it, that your after-sale service specialist would be at home of mine, this encouraging beginning. That has declined to such an extent that the specialist has not come to my house, until I write you now, to get me out of this difficulty in having the broken machine of mine repaired as soon as quickly.

To have your good reputation enjoyed by a little more than customers, I sincerely consider, you should not put me one of your customers in such an embarrassing position that your words are not matched by your deeds. That is to say, to my deep disappointment to you, you are doing little to justify my confidence in you most satisfactorily.

I should like to know how it is that the solution to the washing-machine problem would be successful with inferior quality to be improved or dealt with reasonably.

I should also like to know what steps you are taking to remedy the present situation and meet my requirements for this in terms of two suggestions offered to you as follows.

They are depending on two ways: one is to respond to my renewed request for you to send your service specialist to check or repair the broken machine on spot at home of mine within two-days time, the other is to ask you to repay the full money, the proceeds, of your machine I bought, if any, in default of repairing accordingly in specified time as above mentioned.

Yours faithfully,

One of your customers

Ms. AAA

㈡模板英语和中文思维法写作英语

Dear Mr.Johnson

Hello, this is customer Xiao Wang speaking. l bought a washing machine atyour house two weeks ago, but after only using it for three days, the washing machine leaked

I have called the maintenance center of the shopping mall, and I have communicated with the maintenance workers. They promised to come to my home to repair the washing machine, but they have not come yet.

I'm disappointed with your family's attitude and I want to deal with it properly.

I have two suggestions. We can negotiate a suitable time for on-site maintenance. If the repair is troublesome, I also agree with a full refund.

上述㈠英语逻辑思维法写作英语和㈡模板英语和中文思维法写作英语，作一对比，可以看出：只要本着“英语是逻辑语言，不是模板语言，逻辑是英语的灵魂”的原理，写作英语就一定能够找到英语写作得高分的办法。英语逻辑思维写作的命运应该掌握在各类考生手中。

看到模板英语得低分的危机，还应该看到其更多“次生灾害”的语法及观点逻辑内容叙述不清等等的错误，这些都是学生或大考生共同去面对和需要解决的问题。通过英语思维写作，把低分和高分这种矛盾可以在逻辑的“斡旋”下都能解决，还有什么低分问题不能坐下来认真学习英语逻辑写作呢？

我的提示是——有谁愿意:宁可得低分 抄模板套范文；不得高分英语思维写英语呢？相当一些大考生认为：宁愿得低分而不得高分。大家也许会说我这是开玩笑吧，这还真的不是跟你开玩笑的。本文作者要问：“抓住模板英语的救命稻草,学生真的是会写英语作文避免低分得高分吗？”，其答案是否定的。

关键是，英语写作学习者是否有诚意坐下来学习英语逻辑思维写作，如是肯定，愿意找英语逻辑思维写作老师来学习，而不是急功尽利走捷径且违反“英语是逻辑语言，逻辑是英语的灵魂”之规则，写作英语作文，也就是说，模板英语写作，最终把英语作文写成得低分的“烂泥”。

事实上，英语作文不是靠背诵他人模板而写作，这就如同“吃了他人嚼过的馍”，而且判（阅）卷老师发现，考生写作的是模板英语作文（长像千胞胎万胞胎如模具刻出来的一样）那就降档次、扣分数，没商量。可怜天下学生心呐；花大量时间背大量模板，事倍功半甚至功零得低低分呀！事实上说，越是英语基础不好，就越不要背模板，因为越是努力背模板，越是走入“死胡同”因为背模板解决的是心理问题，不能解决得高分的问题。

与此比较，逻辑思维英语得高分的写作在英语作文学习及实际应用中，已经开始“坐庄”了。由于英语写作有了“战略战术基础”，学生考生通过掌握英语逻辑思维写作方法，才能写作出高分英语原创范文。

这也符合针对一网友留言说：“每次写英语作文很痛苦 内容总是不知道该写什么及该怎么写”的情况解决的办法：学生应遵循“寻原因←提示观点→找结果”之原理，可能一周会学会英语写作的。例如：以“我爱学习英语”为主题，写英语微型作文，可以写：Acquiring knowledge about science from foreign countries, I enjoy learning English to help me communicate foreign experts on professionals.

所以根据原理：在提示句即主题句子（我爱学习英语I enjoy learning English）的左边找原因（因为学习国外科学知识Acquiring knowledge about science from foreign countries），然后在右边找结果（因此帮助我与国外专家就专业进行沟通to help me communicate foreign experts on professionals）。

这就证明：用英语逻辑思维写英语得高分，考生可以参考英语逻辑思维的四种思维方法，即：①一因一果，②一因多果，③多因一果，④多因多果。其表达的最基本的形式是——以提示观点句为中心，左找原因，右找结果。这样一步一步推理写作英语作文——这样写英语作文就完全符合以英语为母语的人写作英语的标准了。如此省时省力具有成活率，大考判（阅）卷老师便给升档次提分数。

难怪使用英语逻辑思维写英语网友说，很有帮助解决了“大考英语作文内容没思路怎么办？”的问题了。更是有理有据有证地回答了本文标题——怎么解决：写英语作文很痛苦 既不知道写啥 又不知道咋写——之问题了。