2022年6月浙江新高考英语

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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台【2022.06浙江卷】读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I need to do something in my community in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school.Some of my friends had sighed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did too.It seemed like a good thing to do.I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need but I found out we would be doing everything-mix the salad dressing and assign vegetable and meat.As the line of people came toward me,I got a little scared.I'd come face to face with the homeless.How should I act How would they treat me Would they hate me for having more than they did While some of the people looked very friendly,some of them looked so dangerous. I didn't have too much time to worry about it.I was assigned(分配 )to serve the salad with the lady next to me .She smiled at me and said if I needed help she’d be right there ,which I found quite comforting.I had never seen so many people wanting food.They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty.Some looked like they had totally given up on life while others seemed to be making the best of the situation smiling and joking.Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal to eat and a warm place to live in.It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn't have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen.Paragraph1:When they came in my direction,I tried to show them the prettiest and happiest smile. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2:I was happy to finish my serving time in this way.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(共12张PPT)Continuation Writing2022年6月浙江高考真题试题再现I need to do something in my community in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school.Some of my friends had sighed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did too.It seemed like a good thing to do.I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need but I found out we would be doing everything---mix the salad dressing(色拉酱) and assign vegetable and meat.As the line of people came toward me,I got a little scared.I'd come face to face with the homeless.How should I act How would they treat me Would they hate me for having more than they did While some of the people looked very friendly,some of them looked so dangerous. I didn't have too much time to worry about it.I was assigned(分配 )to serve the salad with the lady next to me .She smiled at me and said if I needed help she’d be right there ,which I found quite comforting.I had never seen so many people wanting food.They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty.Some looked like they had totally given up on life while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking.Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal to eat and a warm place to live in.It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn't have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen.材料解读characters:I, the homeless,ladysetting:a soup kitchen in my communitytime:before the graduation of high school.conflict:scaredfeeling:scared---- mix the salad dressing混合色拉酱soup kitchen 施粥所情节的构思the lady -----assist ,encourageI ----distribute/hand out the foodthe change of my feeling -----scared--delighted/relievedthe homeless ---accept the food politely ,appreciate our assistance,say thanks to us.para 1 (大方向)The food must have been delivered/distributed to the people in need.（How did I spend my serving hours I/the poor/the lady）Para 2 （大方向）The change in my attitude towards service hours.(What did I realize and what measures did I take afterwards )尽管还是有些害怕，但是我极力为他们分配食物，希望自己的微笑能给他们带来些许安慰。（尝试用倒装句）Scared as I was, I spared no effort to distribute food to them,hoping that my bright smile could comfort/melt her.我做梦都没想到面对那么多衣衫褴褛的客人时，分配食物是那么艰难。Never in my wildest dreams did I imagine that serving salad was so tough when I was facing so many homeless people.忙碌极了 be as busy as a bee心急如焚 be like a cat on hot bricks lady What surprised me was that the poor accepted my service politely,continously uttering”thank you ’’ to me.高级句型一想起这次社区服务的经历，我的心中涌上一股欣慰之情。Reflecting the serving experience in the community, I felt a surge of relief and delight.明白了穷人也和我们一样是善良友好的。It occurred to me that the poor were as kind and friendly as us.我下定决心一有空就去社区做志愿者。I made up my mind to do valuntary work whenever it’s available for me.每当看到他们满意的表情，我觉得我的付出是值得的。The moment I saw their content expressions ,I knew it was worth doing /the effort.升华？高级句型范文赏析Paragraph1:When they came in my direction,I tried to show them the prettiest and happiest smile. Contrary to what I had thought ,some of those homeless people who looked unapproachable at first sight actually were rather friendly. They would smile broadly back at me to show their gratitude when they were served, which immediately put me at ease.Brimming with confidence,alongwith the comforting smile of the lady beside me,I was quickly engaged in the busy work, forgetting all about the negative thoughts.A great sense of happiness and relief flooded over me.Paragraph2:I was happy to finish my serving time in this way.In this both-side beneficial way, I had also learned a lifelong lesson that one should be grateful and optimistic.Seeing those in need who had no access to enough food or clean clothes ,we have every reason to treasure our life and offer a helping hand whenever possible.Even a small act of kindness can make a big difference. In addition,their smile-to-life attitude even in such tough situations also inspired me to overcome any difficulties in life.学生作文点评

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